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Transformed
Contributed by
Debz
on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 08:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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She was once so high-spirited, so free
so full of confidence, so tall
She walked as one with the breeze
with a magnetism that was felt by all
and ambition that reached the very sky
She was the life of the party
so many friends she had made
There was always someone by her side
She was never alone
Seven years have passed since
and now as I look into those eyes of hers
the fire is now distinguished
She walks with her head bowed down low
Her confidence has been shattered
She hides beneath the long fringe she grew
and now, she walks alone
Her friends are so very few
and although she is free again
her spirit has been broken
and her character has been torn
So, what happened to her?
When did this transformation occur?
She looks so tired, so forlorn
almost as though she gave up
on life and even on hope
and I have to ask myself
where did it all go?
Can the person deep inside
be found beneath this person that hides?
For now, I can only see
a person I barely recognise
as I look into this mirror of mine.
Copyright ©
Debz
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2003-01-21 08:20:00]
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Re: Transformed
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by AzurePaladin on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 10:55:49 AM AEST
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| Wow, so sad.... I've had that same experience many times... well written. |
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Re: Transformed
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by roisin on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 12:51:30 PM AEST
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interested in what the last 2 yrs have brought to the subject of your write...a good one by the way
ta for sharing
rosie |
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Re: Transformed
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by Debz on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 04:11:37 AM AEST
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| Thanks Rosie. I'm back to the way I once was except maybe not so naieve! The shyness will always be there but, I'm back to the old, bubbly me again! :-) |
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