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SWAN
Contributed by
julia
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Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 08:36:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The swan swims past
So silently,
Her dress of feathers
Swift and sweet.
Head under water
She searches for food ,
Fishes for feed
They hide in the reed.
Frightened and flurried
They head for the shore,
As the bird continues
To search for more.
The beak of this bird
Has captured their lives,
She returns above
As she reverses the dive.
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julia
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2005-10-27 20:36:16]
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Re: SWAN
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by ArsenicMyst on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 09:59:31 PM AEST
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i lke this poem
cunning and cruelty
tho seen as grace and beauty ...
well done
¸·:·´Arsenic
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Re: SWAN
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by Alibi on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 01:28:34 AM AEST
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| This had a nice rhythm to the verse that in a way, paid homage to the beautiful bird of which you speak. Lovely poem! They are such a graceful bird, and you captured that here. Blessings! Keep up the poetry. |
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Re: SWAN
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 02:23:08 AM AEST
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| this poem is short yet so sweet a write. Great pen! |
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Re: SWAN
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 03:19:26 AM AEST
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I guess the point is found in the pointlessness of the fishes lives...or that the preditor's appearance in life is beautiful, and therfore more valuable than that of little fishes' lives.
Wonderful write. |
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Re: SWAN
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 07:37:25 PM AEST
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| More people should read this. It got me thinking! |
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