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Death Of Christ
Contributed by
fredsmith
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Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 06:40:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Death Of Christ
Nailed to the cross,
He looks to the heavens.
He asks what he did wrong,
And why this is happening.
He dies from our mistake,
We had judged him wrong.
Resurrected from the anger,
The curse of our father.
The death of Christ,
It made us stronger.
Spawn of satin,
Wrath of god.
The light I cannot see,
I’m buried in darkness.
Drink the blood,
Sin your soul.
Fireballs from the heavens,
The plague of human kind.
The pain will never stop,
As we where born to die.
Why must I suffer,
Just end my life.
Falling to my grave,
It was all just a lie.
By Fred Smith
Copyright ©
fredsmith
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2005-10-27 18:40:37]
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Re: Death Of Christ
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by SeanMcHaney on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 06:48:46 PM AEST
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| A very sad poem, so many things I want to say about this, it was very well done don't get me wrong, but about the ideas and thoughts behind it. I'll just say this and leave it at that, Christ died for us to save us, not condem us. |
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Re: Death Of Christ
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by DannyGirl on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 06:14:59 PM AEST
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| I hear a lot of sadness in this poem. But I agree with dorkyrunner that Christ choose to die according to His father's will to save us, because He loves us! And He rose again! |
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Re: Death Of Christ
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by DannyGirl on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 06:15:33 PM AEST
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I hear a lot of sadness in this poem. But I agree with dorkyrunner that Christ choose to die according to His father's will to save us, because He loves us! And He rose again!
What were you feeling when you wrote this? |
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