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Souls Of The Sea
Contributed by
gwenevere
on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 06:26:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Sailing on the ocean, dark and very deep
Float above the graveyard, where lost souls do sleep
Souls of those poor sailors lost so far at sea
I can hear their voices, calling out to me
Water ebbs and flows, waves rise and then they fall
Sea gull's swoop above, they are echoing the call
Listening to their sorrow on this dark and stormy day
I kneel down upon the deck and then begin to pray
Thunder is a crashing, lightning all around
Spirit's of the dead rise in an answer to this sound
Feeling of such sadness, sorrow it abounds
Prayers of the lost now, waiting to be found
Calming of the waters, dimly shines the light
Far into the distance, gleams something so bright
Shimmers on the waters, moonlight out to play
Multitude of colours, takes away the grey
Coldness is dispelling, warmth is every where
Peace fullness, contentment, answer to a prayer
Spirits now ascending, out stretched to their goal
Reaching out with wonder, to Saviour of all souls
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gwenevere
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2005-10-27 18:26:38]
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Re: Souls Of The Sea
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 06:37:06 PM AEST
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| I love this poem, the waters have always haunted me, glad to it expressed so beautifully and know I'm not alone. |
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Re: Souls Of The Sea
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by SeanMcHaney on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 06:44:58 PM AEST
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| Yeah that is awesome! I love the imagry! |
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Re: Souls Of The Sea
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by ArsenicMyst on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 10:17:52 PM AEST
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amazing elegiac visions
to contrasting secrets of silence and calm
beautifully written
¸·:·´Arsenic
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Re: Souls Of The Sea
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 11:26:16 PM AEST
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A truly exquisite write... I loved it...
Jenni |
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Re: Souls Of The Sea
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 12:09:14 AM AEST
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Hi Ros-
I love visiting you..(though I haven't for a spell)
I apologize for that Dear-
I like this..
but I TRULY do miss your work
on the days of yore-
Knights of the Round Table..and the like-
You can create far lovelier than this-
(you know that)
Don't relent-
Sincerely Yours- and with Much Affection-
Billy |
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