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The fogy minde of a drugabuser
Contributed by
xanix
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Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 05:44:06 PM in AEST
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drugabuse
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going threw life with a vail over your eyes.With breaf moments of sobrity leading to feelings of insacurity.Waiting for your next fix. Bringing your self to the self realasation that you are living life from drug to drug.Spiroling doun into a depth that to the lay person is incomprehendable.gazing at a shop windoe at the shell of a man that you use to be.Ive had enough i want it backmy feelings my emotions the part of my sole that still wants to liv.As the passing croud looks upon the frantic man on the side walk.sudenly nothing a moment of peace as the man drops all his posetions and heads threw the croud
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Re: The fogy minde of a drugabuser
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 06:29:30 PM AEST
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| I stopped in because of the spelling errors in the title...sounds idiotic, I know. It just made me curious at what the write would be like. The spelling is bad, man. I am honest. The write itself though is good...it is a perfect description ... I would love to see this with the spelling errors fixed and in a more poetic format. It is REALLY a good write. I loved the second line..."With brief moments of sobriety leading to feelings of insecurity" Loved this line as well..."Gazing at a shop window at the shell of a man that you use to be." Deep. I can relate...had some problems years ago. Take care and I wish you well. I think I'll see what else you have. Peace to you, Laura |
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Re: The fogy minde of a drugabuser
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by lostrelic on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 06:30:58 PM AEST
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as someone who knows the finer points of drug and addiction i found this a little hard drugs are a way to escape life
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Re: The fogy minde of a drugabuser
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by SeanMcHaney on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 06:42:06 PM AEST
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| Cool stuff, you did well! |
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Re: The fogy minde of a drugabuser
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by ArsenicMyst on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 06:59:20 PM AEST
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this is a fantastic poem of
tragic conflict and despair ...
the errors (intended or not) only enhance
the depth and feeling of hoplessness ....
not only is it well thought out and written
it is gut wrenching ...
very well done
Arsenic*´¨.¸.·´*
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