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Plastic
Contributed by
johndough111
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Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 07:40:00 AM in AEST
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Plastic
You were so beautiful to the sight
And I couldn’t t stop thinking about you when I struggled through the night
I couldn’t tell spring from fall, pain from bliss
And I did not notice that your blood did not exist
Why couldn’t I tell that although you had petals, you did not have a scent…
That I could touch you, but that you could not be bent.
I remember that day that I saw you from afar… so fair, yet so strong… yes, I still feel.
I feel like a fool, for thinking something so perfect could be real
I recall when I would place myself next to you and I would suffer at your touch… so cold
I see now why I sensed that you would never age old
And then that day, that day I left, I noticed the most horrid of things that may come to mind
Something so atrocious that I cursed at my self for many years for having looked past it
That night that you laid still with your eyes glancing up at mine,
I saw your soul, and it was made out of plastic
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2003-01-21 07:40:00]
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Re: Plastic
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 07:59:13 AM AEST
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| very good write, thanks for sharing this piece of art |
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Re: Plastic
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by mckayla on
Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 11:53:25 PM AEST
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wonderful write!
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