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Whispers Screamed
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 01:10:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Whispers in the wind
voices barely heard
lonely heart speaks
unspoken words
Tears well up in these eyes
sadness tearing me apart
violent shaking of the firmament
self-destruction made an art
Caress myself like a baby
watch it all come undone
places I cannot speak of
have stolen all my fun
Treacherous storms rage
deep within the twisted soul
places I cannot forget
paid very heavy tolls
Push it back
live free for awhile
caught up in the reverie
can't you see me smile?
Games have been played
false foundations laid
spending time in the shell
now, look at what you made.
Laura Horner
8-28-05
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2005-10-27 13:10:00]
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Re: Whispers Screamed
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by steven_fenton1982 on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 03:23:32 PM AEST
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| very good! it's great to leave it sometimes and come back and finish it. |
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Re: Whispers Screamed
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by Ravensfire on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 03:27:21 PM AEST
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| Laura, I truly liked this one, " Treacherous storms rage deep within the twisted soul" WOW ! |
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Re: Whispers Screamed
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by CBlake on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 03:39:46 PM AEST
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Beautiful.
I needed that today.
It was amazing.
Thank You. |
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Re: Whispers Screamed
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 06:44:49 PM AEST
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Why didn't you post this soon ! :P
Really liked it.
Brandin |
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Re: Whispers Screamed
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by ArsenicMyst on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 07:20:26 PM AEST
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*
beautifully written
and so ironic ...
*´¨`·.¸¸.*Arsenic
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Re: Whispers Screamed
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by secretwind on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 03:44:23 PM AEST
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| deep Innervision ....... |
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