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i died the day i became religious
Contributed by
abnormalpunk
on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 10:54:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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the excuses we make
are the reasons we live for
because we dont want to admit
the real life we live
i learned this from experiance
i lied to the ones i love
i lied to the ones i dont
i lied to the ones i trusted
and i lied to the one called me
i hate to look back at the changes ive made
//not because of the change//
but because of the disgrace i am to them
i look around and see
all these happy people
i ask myself
''why cant i be like that''
then i realize
i am
depression is a mind game
we role the dice
and select our own pawns
we choose our happiness
and i have chosen mine
why did i make the choice i did
i have everything i need
and yet
i loathe the misery i live in
this is not what true happiness is
sorrow has enveloped my true feelings
and sadly
without reason
save me father
save me now
i need to live the life i promised you
i need to feel the way i felt
when i chose the right things
i do not have a map to this lonely world
but i do have you
guiding me
leading me
what else could i want
you are my escape from the escapes i have chosen
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abnormalpunk
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2005-10-27 10:54:06]
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Re: i died the day i became religious
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by enigma on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 03:32:13 PM AEST
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...you've got a good focus...your first verse had a ring to it I could relate to...
God bless
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Re: i died the day i became religious
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by russ-dawg on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 04:46:26 PM AEST
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that was awsome "you are my escape from the escapes i have chosen" that is beautiful the whole poem is beautiful but that line that last line just reaches out great work keep it up!
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Re: i died the day i became religious
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by ArsenicMyst on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 06:47:43 PM AEST
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this is a well written honest poem ...
we do need a guiding light when our
vision is blocked by excuses
Arsenic ·.¸·:
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Re: i died the day i became religious
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by Elisabeth on
Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 11:49:18 AM AEST
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| I loved your poem. |
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Re: i died the day i became religious
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by shaydie_lady on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 03:39:43 PM AEST
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I like your poems, but why are they all about dying? Not all Christians are bad you know, you just got to give them a chance.
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