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when you look down on me tonight
Contributed by
brokenwings
on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 05:29:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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when you look down on me tonight,
know my heart has won its fight,
and how i miss you tenderly holding me tight
its time for my heart to feel the light,
so when you look at me from heaven above
and shower me with you undying love,
know that your are my angel, I am stil your dove
but i have found what i lost the day you died... I found love
I look in his eyes, and see no reason to cry
and I finally let him in my heart and not another time i lie
He has given me so many reasons to live, so i Try
how it hurt me to say good bye
You are always with me deep in my mending heart,
and i loved you from the very start
I love you today,
I'll love you tomorrow
and when the day comes i take my last breath,
i'll still love you,
because of him i will make it to that day
with love in my life, and a new reason to live,
because i lost all reasons to live
the night you died,
he just reminded me all over again..
so i will love you forever
until we can be together i will love him
and with you both saved my life, and i am blessed,
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brokenwings
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2005-10-27 05:29:40]
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Re: when you look down on me tonight
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by aprilrose on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 06:54:29 AM AEST
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such a heart felt poem i can not describe
how much this poem touched me thanks for posting it :)aprilrose |
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Re: when you look down on me tonight
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 07:36:45 AM AEST
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This was an incredible poem. You've found love again, someone has picked up your heart, and you've expressed it so well, from the heart. There weren't any phrases you used to sound cool, you used nothing but the words from your heart to make a beautiful piece. Well done.
Take care.
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Re: when you look down on me tonight
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by PainfulSpirit06 on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 09:44:45 AM AEST
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| I'm so sorry you lost someone you loved like that. I don't know what I would do if I lost the person I loved. I fear everyday of losing him. |
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