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Time passing by
Contributed by
fake_emptyness
on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 11:23:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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whaching time pass me by.
it passes by like the blanket of night covers my body.
leing motionless in the dark of night,
feeling of abandonment settling into my stomic.
the quite of night shot by one bullet.
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2005-10-26 23:23:27] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Time passing by
(User Rating: 1 ) by xXxmegsxXx on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 05:41:25 AM AEST (User
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i like ur poem, well written, shows alot of emotion. i know how u feel. people seem to think that if they ignor a problem, then it doesnt exist |
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