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Words that cant: And Never would
Contributed by
brew
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Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 10:22:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Many find the Perfect Picture
It contains what others can not see
We try to look; yet with out full sight..........Its not there
Its felt........in the heart........in the soul
You take and begin
You make and keep going
You know when its found
BUT
Is this the Total Picture
Is it what the inner can want
Yearning for all .;yet no control
Words given
Taking the heart and making all go wild
Not reality
Lies
So what do you want?!
You got what you thought was right?
You won?
No!
Meanings took over and then..... stupidity: Lost.!
Copyright ©
brew
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2005-10-26 22:22:15]
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Re: Words that cant: And Never would
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 06:55:17 PM AEST
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Lol, I like this, it's very different from the vast majority of the poems on the site. It's a style I think I'd find very difficult, but you pull it off rather well.
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Re: Words that cant: And Never would
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by ArsenicMyst on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 09:53:17 PM AEST
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your poem is so direct
stings with flashing thoughts
what makes it so awesome
Arsenic·´`·:·.¸·´*
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Re: Words that cant: And Never would
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 07:55:02 AM AEST
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| good poem wrote from the heart ,,you get a very well done from Me,,,, |
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Re: Words that cant: And Never would
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 06:44:37 PM AEST
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You do have a unique way of expressing your thoughts and emotions there Dayna. I like the way you handled this piece. It's blunt and packed with raw emotions. Keep it up!
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Re: Words that cant: And Never would
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by Man_On_High on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 02:23:32 AM AEST
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Hey Dayna-
This is about pain....and pain alike-
PM me will ya-
(it's beautiful pain it is)
Yours-
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Re: Words that cant: And Never would
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 09:19:46 PM AEST
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Girl you have such an awesome style of writing. Not many can write like that. You write from the heart. I sense pain through your words. You nailed it Dayna. You're a star.
*hugs*
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