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Love Me Once More
Contributed by
Drowning_Dreams
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Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 09:12:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Deep down in my tortured mind,
The pain you caused, ripping me apart…
Leave me alone, I loved you but you pushed me away…
Now you want me back… I will never.
I cried in silence, you saw me in pain,
Yet you did not care.
I love you yet cannot have you.
You loved me but I’m not sure now.
If you cannot love me then neither shall anyone else.
I am cast away, down the flaming halls.
These cuts, just a figment of your imagination.
You wish I was dead so now do I.
Watch the blood as it falls.
These cuts do not hurt as I drink away my pain.
I have lost you, you have lost me…
No person shall have me, because I once loved you…
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Drowning_Dreams
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2005-10-26 21:12:28]
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Re: Love Me Once More
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by Cupid on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 09:25:05 PM AEST
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I know how this feels, Drowning_Dreams.
I really do.
But the good thing is that I predict things will be looking up for you soon.
I know they will.
This poem is MARVELOUS. It displays a good understanding of what poetry is. How it feels to be a 'cutter'.
I did that once.
But I stopped because it wasn't helping.
It just made things more painful.
If you really do 'cut,' you really should stop, no matter how much you think it'll help.
I dunno. It's just a suggestion really.
Good luck, I hope things turn out right. And don't forget to keep on writing.
Your rootin' tootin' writin' friend,
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Re: Love Me Once More
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by GurlyTye on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 12:31:26 PM AEST
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| so much pain in such powerful writting. this is a wonderful peice |
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Re: Love Me Once More
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 07:01:23 PM AEST
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| I love your user name. |
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Re: Love Me Once More
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by Adrianna on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 01:41:53 PM AEST
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| I love this. I can really relate. It says everything that I have been thinking. Keep writing. |
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Re: Love Me Once More
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 06:48:23 PM AEST
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This is quite the emotional spill...Losing at love does indeed suck, but it isn't the be all, end all. The right person will come along when you least expect it. Keep penning your feelings, and things will get better. Nice job.
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Re: Love Me Once More
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by B-Randy on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 07:44:20 PM AEST
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| I'm sorry about how depressed youv'e been lately, but I'm glad that you've started writing poetry again. Your poems are always so beautifully sad... Keep on posting. |
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