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Holes in my Heart
Contributed by
flamingblade
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Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 08:48:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I've got some
holes in my heart
Can you tell?
I suppose not .
No one ever does.
Look outside
on a rainy night
And know that nothin's all right
Just want everything to go away
Never to come back another day.
Say you were sad
How would you react?
Would you tell someone
Or do something
You didn't really want to?
Would you hurt yourself
on purpose
Or would you
finish the job
Get rid of the pain?
Would you put someone down
for being who they are?
Would you stop
the evil merry-go-round
In everyone's head?
And start a new one
of something good for them?
Would you start a group of loners
just to be able to talk
To someone who might understand?
I would answer these questions
But I'm sorry to say
I can't
You see
The answers
were where there are
Holes in my heart.
Copyright ©
flamingblade
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2005-10-26 20:48:03]
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Re: Holes in my Heart
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by Cupid on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 08:56:22 PM AEST
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BRAVO flamingblade!
You've shown a good understanding of what sadness can be.
I've felt the same way. But the holes will eventually close up. Like the holes of those with body piercings.
Trust me, it'll get better.
I've been there, done that, and bought a t-shirt made of tears.
GREAT expression of emotion. I liked this poem a lot.
Cheers,
Cupid |
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Re: Holes in my Heart
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 06:36:56 AM AEST
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Well done. You've got a great piece here. Some questions don't have answers, though. Sometimes they're there to make you think, and you come up with answers to other questions, and I'm getting carried away....
This was good. Keep it up, and a warm welcome to YPDC.
Take care.
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