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hurt her

Contributed by crazy on Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 04:20:18 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

how could ou do that
you hurt her so much
she was in love with you
your such a fool
why do you act like that
you tore her heart to shreds
it bleeds of confusion and anger
she is one of my best friends
you had to do that
why do you like me so **** much
ive heard lies,lies and more lies
i have the ties
to tae you down
to burn the heck out of you
you made her cry on the bus
all the fuss
that we cause is ****
im so ******* confused
i want her happy
and you also
but it seems like a love triangle
you like me,i like her ,she likes you
what is wrong with us
you hurt her i hurt you
i think we just need to stop and breath
take some time and just think
about what we all want
we all got hurt ny the other
to try another path is best
to have some time to rest

Copyright © crazy ... [ 2005-10-26 16:20:18]
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Re: hurt her (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 04:43:01 PM AEST
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It's best to wait out, things will fall into place when the times' right. If he doesn't like her, you can't really expect him to stay with her though, people tend to follow what draws them near, and if thats not her, well then, he won't stray that way lol. What I would watch out for- while I may be wrong. Is that if you like him, and he likes you, you might want to leave it a while, because from past experience you dating him after they've just broken up, will tear apart your friendship. Remember not all poems have to follow a format, no rhyme scheme. Great write.

-Cassy

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