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The Devil Says...
Contributed by
zealousnatalie
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Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 10:05:23 AM in AEST
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I look to the sky. It opens up to me.
I stretch my arms, reaching for the sun.
Warped. Im torn between heaven and earth.
I feel so free, yet im restrained.
Dared by the Devil. He slaps my face.
He sees me smile. I hear him cry.
He says I will pay with my life.
While (HE) rests, I see him fail.
Before his eyes I taunt him there.
I dare to smile. He wipes tears from his eyes.
The sun I know rapidly dies.
This high, im coming down.
The sky spits me out.
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Re: The Devil Says...
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by xanix on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 12:40:47 PM AEST
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| I liked the termanolgy that u used |
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Re: The Devil Says...
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by Lashing_Tongue on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 01:10:42 PM AEST
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Poesie gentille, petite fille
Nice poem |
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Re: The Devil Says...
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by Lionel on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 02:18:45 PM AEST
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What a weird, interesting poem. Write some more; but remember, the devel is a formidable adversary.
God bless |
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Re: The Devil Says...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 03:40:40 PM AEST
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| If I see the abstract of it as expressed by the title I must say this is cleverly done!! |
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Re: The Devil Says...
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by crazy on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 04:54:25 PM AEST
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| ok well i like how the form is tell a story kool write |
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