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Drunk

Contributed by Mild_Tempest on Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 01:21:03 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Drunk

It’s just another drop,
That adds to the sorrow,
A sorrow that I can’t escape,
A sorrow I’m drunk with.

My hearts beating hazily,
My thoughts become obscured,
I’m drunk with sorrow,
I’m breathing heavily.

The sorrow helps me,
Ignore everything else,
I can’t focus on anything,
But the sorrow I’m feeling.

I’ve had sorrow my whole life,
I’m drunk with it everyday,
I’ve felt It for long,
But I’m still not used to it.

My hearts always heavy,
With the familiar pain,
It’s always distinct,
But I’m still not used to it.

I’m addicted to the sorrow,
A sorrow I’m drunk with,
I’m drunk with it everyday,
But I’m still not used to it.




Copyright © Mild_Tempest ... [ 2005-10-26 01:21:03]
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Re: Drunk (User Rating: 1 )
by coolbreeze17 on Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 11:20:18 PM AEST
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not random...its how you are feeling ...great write


Re: Drunk (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 07:14:31 PM AEST
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Nothing like some straight up honesty, and you did it well here...I especially like the ending. Nicely done, and there's no reason you should ever be 'used to it.' Change can come, whenever you're ready...Take Care.


Scorp.


Re: Drunk (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 11:37:55 PM AEST
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A very good emotional write. Well expressed. Not sure anyone could ever get used to "it".

Thank you for sharing & take care.

Tim
:-)



Re: Drunk (User Rating: 1 )
by sleepykisser on Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 10:06:46 PM AEST
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wow i really like this! i especially like the line "im drunk with it everyday" excellent!


Re: Drunk (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Wednesday, 3rd October 2007 @ 10:34:18 AM AEST
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well drunk.hm it can be with differ things, you use to write here didnt you?
hmm
well glad to see you re-posting
now who are you? lol
I like knowing whom I type with
I hope your drunk is over, or maybe subsided some......I hope all is ok
theres always PMs to type to un -bias, opinions....

brew~




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