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Drunk
Contributed by
Mild_Tempest
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Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 01:21:03 AM in AEST
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Drunk
It’s just another drop,
That adds to the sorrow,
A sorrow that I can’t escape,
A sorrow I’m drunk with.
My hearts beating hazily,
My thoughts become obscured,
I’m drunk with sorrow,
I’m breathing heavily.
The sorrow helps me,
Ignore everything else,
I can’t focus on anything,
But the sorrow I’m feeling.
I’ve had sorrow my whole life,
I’m drunk with it everyday,
I’ve felt It for long,
But I’m still not used to it.
My hearts always heavy,
With the familiar pain,
It’s always distinct,
But I’m still not used to it.
I’m addicted to the sorrow,
A sorrow I’m drunk with,
I’m drunk with it everyday,
But I’m still not used to it.
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Mild_Tempest
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2005-10-26 01:21:03]
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Re: Drunk
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by coolbreeze17 on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 11:20:18 PM AEST
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| not random...its how you are feeling ...great write |
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Re: Drunk
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 07:14:31 PM AEST
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Nothing like some straight up honesty, and you did it well here...I especially like the ending. Nicely done, and there's no reason you should ever be 'used to it.' Change can come, whenever you're ready...Take Care.
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Re: Drunk
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 11:37:55 PM AEST
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A very good emotional write. Well expressed. Not sure anyone could ever get used to "it".
Thank you for sharing & take care.
Tim
:-)
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Re: Drunk
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by sleepykisser on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 10:06:46 PM AEST
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| wow i really like this! i especially like the line "im drunk with it everyday" excellent! |
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Re: Drunk
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by brew on
Wednesday, 3rd October 2007 @ 10:34:18 AM AEST
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well drunk.hm it can be with differ things, you use to write here didnt you?
hmm
well glad to see you re-posting
now who are you? lol
I like knowing whom I type with
I hope your drunk is over, or maybe subsided some......I hope all is ok
theres always PMs to type to un -bias, opinions....
brew~ |
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