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Lone Eagle
Contributed by
ramfire
on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 11:07:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Lone Eagle stayed near Lake Ooklae this day.
The sky was cold and gray.
Movlay had told him he must wait not go
the Iroquoian way.
Which trail lead nearer place where white skins stay.
Man rested holding bow.
His shaman told him he must pray to Pale.
With lake god's aid can't fail,
for seeking eagle feather seemed his need.
Good prize soon stole from tail.
To gain back power chanting Mohawk wail.
Lost fight with half breed.
Tall Teela lay but three more day's trek east.
From heights the eagles feast.
to climb the steep hard mountain slope and find
a place to hide not least
among rocks waiting time avoiding beast.
Strong Pale god be all kind.
Copyright ©
ramfire
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2005-10-25 23:07:58] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Lone Eagle
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 11:37:52 PM AEST (User
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this is beautiful laurie
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Lone Eagle
(User Rating: 1 ) by NoSaint on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 11:10:34 AM AEST (User
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magnificent
Shari |
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Re: Lone Eagle
(User Rating: 1 ) by ever1der on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 04:06:33 PM AEST (User
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really different from anything I've read recently. beautiful. |
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