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searching for the light
Contributed by
emokid
on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 09:58:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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once light shone bright
but the light flickered
and grew dim
but one light
plus one fire
equals supernova
looking for light
inside of me
I know its there
its just hard
to see
see the things
I've done
has smothered the flame
I'm trying to get a nova
just give it time
and I'll be bright as the sun
looking for light
inside of me
I know its there
its just hard
to see
together we'll blind the world
but I can't do it alone
listen to your heart
and please stay
right here with me
make me shine
looking for light
inside of me
I know its there
its just hard
to see
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emokid
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2005-10-25 21:58:40]
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Re: searching for the light
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by Sinfullilmissmuppet on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 10:09:21 PM AEST
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Dont let your light go
out when ur absolutley deslote the hope that its there is all that u;ve got in the world
once u lose that
well...
i hope u dnt find out
till next time
emz |
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Re: searching for the light
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by ever1der on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 11:03:13 PM AEST
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| I hope she reads it too .. |
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Re: searching for the light
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 11:21:42 PM AEST
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you must be careful when making use of abstract metaphors attempting to explain any phenomenon. One light plus one fire does not equal a supernova.
Then again, perhaps I missed a chapter somewhere in Hawkings corpus.
better luck next time. |
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