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Hopes dieing
Contributed by
fake_emptyness
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Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 09:57:17 PM in AEST
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Theres no point in living this life,
battered and torn like the hand which lights the candle of hope.
as we watch it burn down to nothing we know hope is fadeing away.
when the hope is gone,
why should i live?
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fake_emptyness
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2005-10-25 21:57:17]
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Re: Hopes dieing
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by Sinfullilmissmuppet on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 10:13:12 PM AEST
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Youy should live
I live and yea it gets horrrible lonely and desolate
I live in hope one day that i'll get what i deserve and be happy
Live for the curiousity of tomorro
and the strength you'll gain today
if that hasn't convinced u
live because ur poetry rocks
till next time doll
emz |
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Re: Hopes dieing
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by Elayner27 on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 10:17:22 PM AEST
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| This poem is really preaty, I wish it was longer.... I hope you hold on because believe me it'll get better after it gets worse. |
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Re: Hopes dieing
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by Mild_Tempest on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 11:22:05 PM AEST
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I've often wondered about this myself. But then I think... What if I WASN'T on earth. I'd be missing a lot of happiness I'm feeling right now. I think it's worth living.
-Will |
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Re: Hopes dieing
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 01:45:17 AM AEST
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this is very thought provoking and i always ask this one myself.. this is short and to the point.. well expression .. small but the right wording.. great job
Jenni |
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