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Love Returned
Contributed by
suprasurfer
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Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 09:12:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A mistake I made in the eyes of love
Scorned from heaven, as I look above
I thought time could alter loves song
but only flesh has come and gone
From dust and shard may beauty rise
From The Sculptors hand, and in his eyes
The dark storm easily hidden from shore
In the beautiful silence that comes before
The tenderness true in nature
Cannot be hidden from any creature
Pain shared forever between two hearts
Is a sign that the other each holds ones part
Do not starve, my love, for I send you food
Feed my love, for I shall return to you
Never give up and neither shall I
I pledge again forever, beyond when I die
Though parted by earth, we're not by love
I feel happiness when Im sad as I look above
remember always the look in my eyes
for when ours met I swear...they did not lie
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suprasurfer
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2005-10-25 21:12:22]
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Re: Love Returned
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 09:15:48 PM AEST
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Aww, very sweet, gives you a happy feeling. Great write.
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Re: Love Returned
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 01:46:37 AM AEST
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awesome flow and you can feel the love through this.. very beautiful write
thanks for sharing
Jenni |
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