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Killing For Love!
Contributed by
MajesticPoet
on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 08:15:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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300 more days
Im stuck on 65
Trying to set things right
Trying to end the night
Its cold outside tonight
And where is she?
Im hiding from myself again
Cutting deep into my skin, its my only medicine
Im playing music
to drown myself of my own sorrows
I look into the mirror again
When will the healing begin?
Tears are running down my face
Like waterfalls into my chin
I cant go on
I CANT GO ON LIKE THIS!!!
Its warming up outside
But not inside of me
The fear of life's uncertainties
Are wearing out my empty soul
But I hide my life of desperation
With smiles and lies
It seems that I am primed
For suicide
Save yourself, I cant save you
Save myself, You cant save me
Right now I tell myself
Nothing seems to go right
The situation is critical
I lost it, lost all the love
Im killing for love
Killing myself for love
The smile on my face
Will not fix this broken heart
Dig into my skin, break through the pain
Tile floor now one big crimson stain!
Love killed me along time ago,
So I am killing for love now
Drown in my head
Leave me alone, let my heart become dead!
Copyright ©
MajesticPoet
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2005-10-25 20:15:39]
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Re: Killing For Love!
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 08:22:15 PM AEST
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| your emotions in each word is what made this poem so great..keep it up |
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Re: Killing For Love!
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 08:25:26 PM AEST
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We all have our own ways of release, I can relate. Love, is such a hard thing to define, they say you know when your inlove, yet when your almost positive you are, and you just can't let go of this person, it doesn't work, and then you go from the happiest person, to the most miserable. The things we do because of love, I've vowed against it lol. You can bring yourself up as many times as you want, you can smile and laugh and say it's all ok, but if its not, your just making it worse. The perfect lie. No one knows but you, so you think it's ok, the thing is to tear down that wall of pretend and let out what needs to be, show your emotions, scream, cry, kick whatever you need to. But causing harm to yourself, only numbs and delays the pain, and when it does eventually catch up, it hurts so much more, then you end up going to far. Say what you need to, do what you need to, don't let love tear you down, because there are other people out there. Amazing write, very relatable, sorry if I was way off lol.
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Re: Killing For Love!
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 08:55:49 PM AEST
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| It's all Type O Negativeish...I LIKE IT! |
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Re: Killing For Love!
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 08:55:50 PM AEST
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| It's all Type O Negativeish...I LIKE IT! |
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Re: Killing For Love!
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by Sinfullilmissmuppet on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 09:41:30 PM AEST
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That was great!!!
well ok not great but literarily well you know what i mean
I can totally realte and it was so emotive
thanx for sharing
till next time
emz |
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Re: Killing For Love!
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by Elayner27 on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 10:56:18 PM AEST
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| ...wow that's all I can say. I read this, and I just was completely awed. You have no idea, my eyes even welted up and I am not an emotional person. Your write was fantastic, I loved it so much. I can't wait to read more of you works...wow... You are incredible. |
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