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Good Girl
Contributed by
emptymyth
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Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 02:37:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The colors of my choice
the clothes that you wear
how you've done your make-up
the style of your hair
Sitting up straight
doing as I say
following every order
I know you must obey
In reality I am the slave
to you I do belong
as we travel forever together
keeping each other strong
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emptymyth
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2005-10-25 14:37:48]
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Re: Good Girl
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by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 03:42:54 PM AEST
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very nice poem nice flow
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Re: Good Girl
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by _Raspberry_ on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 04:56:31 PM AEST
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| Wow. Very well written! Thank you. |
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Re: Good Girl
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 11:01:14 AM AEST
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Well written.. Nice flow.. Great poem..
take care
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Re: Good Girl
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by Uncertain_Oblivion on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 11:44:21 AM AEST
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| this was sweet... |
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