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Things Are As They Appear To Be
Contributed by
sararose1950
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Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 01:04:55 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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I look outside as the rain falls down,
my troubles, so many, lost to the sound.
Things are not always as they appear to be,
that phrase..the words.. not right for me.
Perhaps things ARE as they appear to be,
our lives, our loves.. as others see.
If this is so, then we master our fate,
we control what enters our gate.
So we tear down the walls, show the world the "me",
then things truly are.. as they appear to be.
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sararose1950
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2005-10-25 13:04:55]
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Re: Things Are As They Appear To Be
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by enigma on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 03:31:30 PM AEST
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...nice little romp through thought...it matters little if things aren't the way they appear, (we perceive them), we base our actions, our feelings on what we have come to trust the most...sight and sound...our sensory input...
...enjoyable...
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Re: Things Are As They Appear To Be
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 10:53:41 AM AEST
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This is a very profound composition Sara.
We all see things as they appear to us. i.e. our perception at a given moment in time.
But that can change, as we go through life, or rather the many small death we have to go through in order to become the soul we are meant to be.
Your poem is very inspirational.
Thanks a lot Sara for sharing.
Blessings!
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Re: Things Are As They Appear To Be
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 12:49:22 AM AEST
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sara this is lovely and insightful a treasure box of wisdom glad i took the same path u did and discovered your poetry, thank u.
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Re: Things Are As They Appear To Be
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by dobad on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 09:13:28 PM AEST
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| "What you see, is what you get" written more eliquently, by someone lucky enough to find truth in themself. Good show! |
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