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°°°Protecting Wings°°°
Contributed by
OreO
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Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 02:40:00 AM in AEST
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Small tiny child, pure heart of beauty
Hear my words, in your time of need
Give me all your ailments upon my old back
I'll carry them for you, so it's not so bad...
When you close your precious eyes to dream
Just look at the angels Protecting White Wings
Dance and be merry amongst children like you
So tomorrow when you wake, you hear i love you...
Now if you see mommies tears falling real slow
Just know that she loves you, Robert 20 months old...
And if you see Daddy's eyes watered with tears
He's trying to be strong in his wise years..
Little robert so far away from us in miles
I hand you a pocket full of sunshine and smiles
Im not a religious one, but for you i'll pray
That tomorrow when you wake, your pain flies away...
~Robert- Protected In Angel's White Wings~
Copyright ©
OreO
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2003-01-21 02:40:00]
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Re: °°°Protecting Wings°°°
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by Damien on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 03:07:15 AM AEST
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Hey OreO ,
that was a really good and touchy poem,keep up the good work,
Wishes,
Damien. |
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Re: °°°Protecting Wings°°°
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 03:45:24 AM AEST
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| Oreo, beautiful poetry .. I like "hand you a pocket full of sunshine and smiles" ... that is so sweet. |
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Re: °°°Protecting Wings°°°
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 03:59:24 AM AEST
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A real Poem which has come through a real poetess. Wow ,Oreo! How great those lines are
" give me all your ailments upon my old back" " I hand you a pocket full of Sunshine and smiles"..
OreO, I am seeing the depths of my mothers heart..In this poem..I love it...Vennie |
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Re: °°°Protecting Wings°°°
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 10:03:50 AM AEST
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Oreo,Beautiful loving words for a loving cause!
The poem touched me as I know it will them!
The out pour of effection for this child is so beautiful! Christina |
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Re: °°°Protecting Wings°°°
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 08:18:28 PM AEST
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Hey this was really sweet and I can feel your compassion in this.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: °°°Protecting Wings°°°
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 10:06:06 PM AEST
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HI OREO,
THIS IS BEAUTIFUL I JUST LOVE IT,YOU CAN TELL ITS FROM THE HEART.
YOUR CHILD IS BLESS TO HAVE SOMEONE LIKE YOU FOR A MOM.RICHARD CAMPBELL. |
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Re: °°°Protecting Wings°°°
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by spooky on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 10:35:49 PM AEST
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| as for you ,,you have a way with words,,you show heart,,love,,everything that words have to offer,,your touching words for baby robert,,was touching ,,well written,,a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: °°°Protecting Wings°°°
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by Chrissie on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 08:44:24 AM AEST
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This is so beautiful and heartfelt OreO...I love the line .. I'll hand you a pocket full of sunshine and smiles.
Chrissie :) |
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Re: °°°Protecting Wings°°°
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 11:11:54 AM AEST
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| This is a very heart touching poem. My heart feels the pain as well and I don't know the little one. You truly know how to put feelings into words OreO. Very beautiful write. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: °°°Protecting Wings°°°
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 11:39:39 PM AEST
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Dearest Cookie, again my thanks for this lovely heartfelt poem, Robert's aunty Rita and I were very touched with the whole very special medley of poetry upon the day yours went out to the family, and also thank you for being one of the first to respond, Robert has been going through this for 2 1/2 months now, he is getting kemo therapy and his Mommy and Daddy read all the poetry in the hospital, I personally have never been prouder of; or prouder to be a part of; any group in my life, all the love, prayers, well wishes & poetry are helping one small family thru a very hard time, Robert's picture is now up in his forum thanks to Mick who is much more talented than I:)
Peace Nessa
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Re: °°°Protecting Wings°°°
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by karoody on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 11:22:05 PM AEST
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| very good....you have a way with words and a very big heart! |
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