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Rainbow Kirby
Contributed by
DreamPoetess
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Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 09:59:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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Cool blue, the mighty Kirby
Expertise diabolic enemy:>
Cream puff in the spotlight
Powerful machine, from finish to fright:>
He may be pink sunshine, round, a colorful rainbow
His mysterious spaceship will come in eternal snow:>
The devilish dream of total domination
He will diminish, vacuum up, he is total abomination:>
The mindscape, dark force
Shattering chief leader, his resort, is his recourse:>
He attacks the free dreamland
Kirby is the ultimate man:>
A large puffball, full of smoke
A deep space breath you must toke:>
He confronts the ultimate nightmare
He is careful; he is aware:>
This super rainbow smash
Is dreamland free, and brash:>
He is the intellectual guide
The vacuum, a most powerful stride:>
Meagan writes:>
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DreamPoetess
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Re: Rainbow Kirby
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 01:21:22 AM AEST
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A most beautiful write, yes all the dreams come true and child hood wonderment u have captured so glorious in this gem of a poem, truly lovely . . .
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Re: Rainbow Kirby
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 02:43:39 PM AEST
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| fantastic write, I enjoyed reading it,,the things kids love,,,,you get a well done off me |
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Re: Rainbow Kirby
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 06:14:08 PM AEST
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Meagan wonderfully written for your dear grandson. It's truly amazing what kids like. You've done this with style. Well done
*hugs*
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Re: Rainbow Kirby
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 09:56:37 AM AEST
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Beautifully and sensitively penned Meagan.
I can imagine how kids love it.
It takes extraordinary insight to write for children. You have the extraordinary skill to do it.
Kudos
Elizabeth |
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Re: Rainbow Kirby
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 04:49:34 PM AEST
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Meagan, is this the one you thought you lost, that you wrote with your grandson? Nice job with this write either way. You make this Kirby guy sound pretty cool. I must admit, I have no idea who he is, other than he's some sort of kids' character : )
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Re: Rainbow Kirby
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 02:19:03 PM AEST
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Beautifully done!
Yoyu grandson is a lucky little man.
Jeff |
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