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as one
Contributed by
aprilrose
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Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 03:14:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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As we unite as one feelings emotions fireworks of a passionate love,
come togeather heart body and soul from this day on.
As you kiss my lips i feel forevers bliss.
The vowes I say cant even relate to my heart and how it feels to have your last name.
Dreams of this day constantly replay.
Filling my heart with the passion of the first day, the first kiss, the passionate fire in your lips.
Our destiny we are meant to be as one for eternity.
Copyright ©
aprilrose
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2005-10-25 03:14:56]
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Re: as one
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by Whisper on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 05:18:51 AM AEST
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Wonderful write if it was only true for us all :-(
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Re: as one
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 07:43:52 AM AEST
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| fantastic write ,,I loved it from start to finish |
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Re: as one
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by Bruce on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 08:49:03 AM AEST
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| Lucky you, and always stay that way |
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Re: as one
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by Blessedangel on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 12:35:26 PM AEST
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thats exactly how i feel now i've met 'the one'
great piece |
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Re: as one
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by GurlyTye on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 02:47:38 PM AEST
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| sometimes the simplest of things are the most powerful. this is a very beautiful write. |
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Re: as one
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 01:17:01 AM AEST
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Congradulations, so beautiful and heart warming all my best 2 u both . . .
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