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poem for realization (and a bullet to the head)
Contributed by
abnormalpunk
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Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 10:14:23 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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i finally got my life in place...
but its not the place i want
or at least
[i think]
its not
sadly
//i look back at my past//
and miss it
::sometimes::
but if i know i shouldnt be there
why do i long to be there
for i know i cannot be there
all i can look forward to is
the future
Copyright ©
abnormalpunk
... [
2005-10-24 22:14:23]
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Re: poem for realization (and a bullet to the head)
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 12:18:13 AM AEST
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yes look forward, never forget the past ,dont dwell on it ,learn from it and live life. Very strong write
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Re: poem for realization (and a bullet to the head)
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 01:41:47 AM AEST
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a short, but good write putting your past
behind you can be hard since it is something
that I struggle with as well. I think you have a
new fan.
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Re: poem for realization (and a bullet to the head)
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by russ-dawg on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 04:41:57 PM AEST
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| i have that same prolem great write keep it up! |
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