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try to guess the poem
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 10:07:49 PM in AEST
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submitted for your approval are my words of concern
your world is being consummed by the great corporate worm
your building their towers and polluting the sky
when the whole thing comes crashing down dont ask me why
its plagueing your heart and corrupting there your soul
it wont be long till it takes it toll
destroying the oceans and killing the sea
when the whole thing washes away dont run to me
our land is dying and science builds our food
this world is chaotic dont you feel the mood
music and movies there vision so loud
words from the wise the blind walk so proud
this is our life as seen on tv
we follow the dumb so what then are we
i wont fight it alone this society so unreal
i cant be the only one who can feel
this pain in my heart i feel everyday
watching humanity wasting away
Copyright ©
lostrelic
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2005-10-24 22:07:49]
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Re: try to guess the poem
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by AbnormalPunk on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 10:30:03 PM AEST
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| simply put... this was horrible |
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Re: try to guess the poem
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by brew on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 11:01:05 PM AEST
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Um i do disagree it was a GREAT write.yet I have read, can not say what it is...............Sorry! I do tho, relate....saddness, and heart put into all and then BAM.......sorry! Thanks for sharing again..but sorry, I cant remember, it exactly.!
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