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If I Could Tell You Anything

Contributed by craigcully on Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 07:36:40 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



If I could tell you anything
What would it be
It would start with I still love you
Do you still love me

If I could ask you anything
I’d ask “where did I go wrong”
When did the love we built
Stop and not move on

Where would I be
If you were by my side
Could I still be happy
If we gave it one more try?

I hate to think it’s gone
But I know it’s true
But it’s the one thing that I got
Holding on to you

Be it right, be it wrong
It gets me through the day
So I can go to sleep and act
Like you never went away

If I could tell you anything
I’d keep it all inside
Cause it would hurt too much to see
It all pass me by

Maybe I let you go to easy
Maybe I should have tried
To keep us all together
For you to stay mine

Even if we stayed
Together to this point
You’d still be a free spirit
I can’t pretend to bring you joy

If we were still together
You’d still be unhappy
And I would be exhausted
Thinking how to be

Everything you want
And everything you need
I would not be happy
Knowing I couldn’t be

All the space you need
And all the time to grow
I can’t make you love me
But I think you ought to know

If I could tell you anything
This is what I’d say
I’d start with I still love you
And that every night I pray

That somewhere deep inside your heart
You still have love for me
And you ask yourself the question
If I could tell you anything




Copyright © craigcully ... [ 2005-10-24 19:36:40]
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Re: If I Could Tell You Anything (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 07:46:20 PM AEST
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Great. I liked the rhyme. you got the feeling across well and still rhymed; sometimes a hard thing to do.


Re: If I Could Tell You Anything (User Rating: 1 )
by moon_light on Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 08:36:43 PM AEST
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if a picker paints a tougsand words you have painted a million. you have coult a qustion many have asked over and over agien. good wright.
oh and welcome to ypdc.

lady moonlite


Re: If I Could Tell You Anything (User Rating: 1 )
by BurriedByMyLies on Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 10:23:15 PM AEST
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Very nice, touching and easy to grasp poem. Keep up the great work !


Re: If I Could Tell You Anything (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 11:10:49 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC... I enjoyed your poem very much..I hope things work out for you..
Jenni


Re: If I Could Tell You Anything (User Rating: 1 )
by hoist1atca on Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 12:28:37 AM AEST
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It doesn't matter what I think or anyone else for that matter-
It is your poem so what you think is all that matters-
Keep writting and I look foreward to reading more of your words...
Joe


Re: If I Could Tell You Anything (User Rating: 1 )
by Lashing_Tongue on Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 03:00:13 PM AEST
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A long and boring collection of random, generic sappy mush.


Re: If I Could Tell You Anything (User Rating: 1 )
by Chilibear on Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 08:04:02 PM AEST
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Absolutely amazing! And I know how you feel.... Keep it up.


- Chili




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