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Hunter and Prey
Contributed by
wordpoet
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Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 12:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The blood of my soul runs from my eyes and gently down my cheek,
While the legs that once supported me have suddenly grown weak.
I tremble softly to and fro as breath flows to my chest,
The life I live seems worthless now, so barren from this crest.
A forsaken land is where I dwell, like this road I travel on,
My hearts true path a memory, now that all my hope is gone,
But looking back I see your face, such beauty to behold,
A shame the love that I once had is slowly growing cold.
If only you could capture me, be hunter, I’ll be prey,
And gain the strength to bring me down, don’t let me get away.
But alas the seasons come and go, as winter settles in,
The hunters bow is put aside, the chase did not begin.
But if one day you’ll draw the bow, take bead upon my heart,
And be the hunter once again, it’s then the chase will start.
I’ll keep you running for a while but in the end you’ll win,
Your prey will keep you satisfied, the way it should have been.
By: Doug Morton
http://wordpoet.tripod.com
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Re: Hunter and Prey
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 01:20:46 AM AEST
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Wow Doug this is deep.....very beautifully written with such passion and desire, I hope one day she picks the bow back up and hunts again...this has a sadness yet and inspiration upon it as well....this is beautiful....love this one...thanks for sharing it...
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Re: Hunter and Prey
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 11:45:27 AM AEST
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| That was just great Doug! One of my favorites I have read on ypdc! Such vivid emotion. wow hats off to ya pal :o) |
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Re: Hunter and Prey
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by roisin on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 01:28:36 PM AEST
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best luck to you wordpoet that love will find you again..a beautiful write
ta
rosie |
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Re: Hunter and Prey
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by Chrissie on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 05:22:04 PM AEST
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A pleasure to read ...Your first line took my breath away.
Chrissie |
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Re: Hunter and Prey
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 04:35:56 PM AEST
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| wistful and dreamie, love it, filled with wishes, misses and a longing of kisses.. |
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Re: Hunter and Prey
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by Lia on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 05:39:07 PM AEST
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| ok..so slap me for missin this one...awesome Doug..I love it! |
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