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Serious luv
Contributed by
blessedangel
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Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 12:34:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Monday Morning
I really luv de girl dat's sitting next to me
I think she likes me an she's so cool,
I think dat we could live forever happily
I want to marry her when i leave school
She's de onle one in school allowed to call me Ben
When she does maths I luv de way she chews her pen,
When we are doing art she's so artistic
In biology she makes my heart beat quick.
When we do geography i go to paradise
She's helped me draw the map of borneo twice!
Today she's going to help me take the books home
So i'm going to propose top her when er're alone.
The Next Day
I used to love de girl dat's sitting next to me
But yesterday it all came to an end,
She said i should take love more seriously
An now i think i really love her friend.
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blessedangel
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2005-10-24 12:34:16]
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Re: Serious luv
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by Kellros on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 01:01:13 PM AEST
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| I laughed when I read this, good write! Keep it up :) |
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Re: Serious luv
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by mjh0813 on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 09:26:17 AM AEST
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hahaha nice
keep this up makes me smile
meghann |
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