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Dorm Room Logic
Contributed by
nosoup4crr
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Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 01:37:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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From a saturated sleep I awoke this morn,
and waddled to the shower.
My alarm clock, the subject of hatred and scorn,
no friendlier to minute or hour.
I cradled myself there, on those cold porcelyn tiles,
to the ground, a fixated stare.
And on my soap, something festering and vile,
a foreign pubic hair.
It lay cozy and deep, this singular follicle,
an unwelcome guest—so rude
And then I thought it seemed somewhat illogical
a second thought was spent on this pube.
For the world is made up of universal truths,
rules by which we live.
If soap could be dirty, it would never be used,
Because if soap is not clean, than what is?
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nosoup4crr
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2005-10-24 01:37:16]
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Re: Dorm Room Logic
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by Sinfullilmissmuppet on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 01:59:18 AM AEST
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hey,
hahaha thats really cool
its nice to see something less serious
Although that is kinda grotty
Mmm well im kinda bored so im jus cruising round reading peoples poems
good luck with the soap :p
Till next time
emz
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Re: Dorm Room Logic
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 07:39:07 PM AEST
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| I can relate, because I lived in a dorm my first year of college...well except to the soap part...that's just...hmm...anyway... |
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Re: Dorm Room Logic
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by Blaze on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 02:35:17 AM AEST
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Lol, I wondered about the soap thing myself.
Cute poem you have there. :-) |
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