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The Welcoming...
Contributed by
Sinfullilmissmuppet
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Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 01:36:58 AM in AEST
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The door sits silently
Beckoning the tempted
Waiting for a reason
To change its suspended state
He sits waiting behind door ajar
He plays wolf
From fabled fairy tales
Where is his little red ride?
She wears red lips
Proud. Arrogant. Rebelling outside reason.
She hasn't time for warnings,
Loud as fresh corpses
The door slowly opens
The arthritic hinges squeal
It smiles at the prey
Entering the spiders tomb
He sees red
He bares his fangs
He feels her body
He feels.........hungry
She sees hostility
She wishes she weren’t so red
She feels the bite marks
She feels .........consumed
The door masks the sound
Of the terrors of the night
From the radiance of putrid light
The door locks
He plays little games
Twisted little fun
The fly dangling, cocooned on silver strand
The game already won
She feels the rope burn
She hates her
She wants freedom
Too late little one
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Re: The Welcoming...
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by guiltycircles on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 06:53:34 AM AEST
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| chilling...its a great write, really evokes the senses |
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Re: The Welcoming...
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by Forever_Now on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 06:54:47 AM AEST
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| Nice wordplay, you painted the images well..a bit like visual velvet. |
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Re: The Welcoming...
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 04:41:12 PM AEST
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chilling is right lol
i love it thanks for sharing. |
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Re: The Welcoming...
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 07:39:43 PM AEST
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Nice job, loved this one.
Brandin |
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Re: The Welcoming...
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by Blaze on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 02:28:01 AM AEST
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"He sees red
He bares his fangs
He feels her body
He feels.........hungry"
^ My favorite verse. ^
Awesome descriptions; nice work. |
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Re: The Welcoming...
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by hellsfallenangel on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 01:36:06 AM AEST
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i like this is dark with a bit of psychotic to boot very nice write
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