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If I Ended It All
Contributed by
bsand
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Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 12:43:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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If I ended it all today, would you even know I’m gone
Would you miss me, would you care?
Or would you just forget me, and move on.
If I ended it all today, would you miss my stare
If I ended it all today, I just don’t think that’s fair.
When I wake up in the morning, and go to sleep at night
I think about you constantly, you’re always on my mind
Through the good times and the bad, it’s an endless fight.
I love your playful touch, your gaze is so kind.
Everything I search for, everything I need, in you I find.
If I ended it all today, would it even matter
Or would you try and stop me, bring me back across the line.
Or would you just sit back, and watch my world shatter.
If I ended it all today, would you be fine.
If I ended it all today, you could never be mine.
I’m not going to end it, I’m not giving in now.
I just want you to be mine, you could make it all right.
I would give you everything I have, I just don’t know how.
Some days you make me feel so small, you put me out of sight.
If I ended it all today, that would stop the fight.
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2005-10-24 00:43:34]
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Re: If I Ended It All
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by Forever_Now on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 07:01:44 AM AEST
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Re: If I Ended It All
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by crazy on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 04:04:50 PM AEST
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every word that i read it felt like i was saying them i wish i could find a way to tel you how good this is but i dont have the words to describe such a poem that has really ment tomuch to me i was seeing all the words in real life as if it was really happening this has never happened to me b4 so i dont know how to comment
but to say your poem has touched me in a way nothing else ever has thanks |
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