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The Right Direction
Contributed by
Willofree
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Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 09:15:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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As I contemplate my direction in life
I explore past history
Which serves as my compass
To regain the proper direction
That our focus for today
Live on to be yesterdays' testimony
Of stalwart effort in the right direction
To help build our foundations for the future
Let pleasant memories flood the highways of our mind
Allowing minimal space for sadness and misery to maneuver
Not to rest on our laurels
Rather moving onward to new horizons
Sometimes we make a wrong turn
This becomes a challenge and decision to discern
So that we may hopefully prevent serious mishaps
Instead to get back on track
So many experiences to sort through
And decipher what they all mean
May our life impart wisdom to us
That we may ultimately discern our destiny
Copyright ©
Willofree
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2005-10-23 21:15:25]
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Re: The Right Direction
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 10:59:26 PM AEST
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While I have to agree about the flow, it was an extremely inspirational write and one I thoroughly enjoyed...
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Re: The Right Direction
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by brew on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 09:00:02 AM AEST
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Agreed........yet I feel, we can turn our destiny.! Take the other path and see what is there.! Yes, there are MANY obstacles,. I know that ALL to well.! But, hurdle over them. May take a little time, but DO IT!
Loved the write.
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Re: The Right Direction
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 01:31:07 PM AEST
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Reading this, it makes me feel like I'm sneaking a peek in someone's diary. It just has that in-the-moment mindspill appeal to it. I enjoy writes such as this, because it's good to get them out onto the page, and just release those feelings. Nicely done!
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Re: The Right Direction
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by crazy on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 04:31:13 PM AEST
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| quite amazing i wish my words would blend like that thats really kool loved it |
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Re: The Right Direction
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 07:51:41 PM AEST
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Here here!! Great write Will! Very reflective poem.
I especially liked,
"Not to rest on our laurels
Rather moving onward to new horizons"
I know more than a DOZEN people who could learn
a thing or two from that ....
Thanks for sharing this.
~Breezy
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