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should have
Contributed by
moon_light
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Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 08:30:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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i should have forgotin.
should have let go.
why do thease fealings hunt me so.
the ancers my heart yerns to know.
i should mnot feal this way.
why do you torcher me to day.
i feal alown.
no one niotices me.
no one sees how i feal.
sometimes it dosent seem real.
"whats the deal"
stop telling me how
i should feal.
you'll never understand.
is that fates fair plain.
should have forgotin.
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Re: should have
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 09:18:05 PM AEST
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I really do like your phonetics, your system of speech sounds the mark of this poem in a most delicate way, I am honored you commented on my poem, in order for me to find the way to you. The firm reasoning of your words are spoken to the language of emotional creativeness, perhaps one skilled in such fine arts could understand, beautiful write, poem...
Raquel Leah :D
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Re: should have
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by thumper on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 06:35:54 AM AEST
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Gramma used to say "You'll go up a horse's....ummm......"patoot"..... if that's where love takes you". (Of course, granny said it alot more graphically...lol). We don't pick love, love picks us. It's a hard thing to love someone and then just let go.
I love the way you write. It's always seems to flow so flawlessly. Also, I always enjoy your poems. It comes from a beautiful mind. ;o) By the way, is he in school this year? I haven't heard.
Good work here Jen. Keep it up.
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Re: should have
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by hellsfallenangel on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 10:21:39 AM AEST
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hey this is a good write hun very sad though and ur right the past is the past live in the now ttyl hun love u
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