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Contributed by
DreamPoetess
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Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 02:53:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Sorry, this poem is for me, if you happen to read, its ok:> Its either this way of writing, or my heart will foul up, I read, in a poem, yesterday, a baby learns to walk, pull himself up, and repeats, try, cry again:
Oh I could swing on a star
I could pull the twinkle down from the skies
I could box fight you in a dance method
But I wont
Pick up my tray of goodies
Wiggle around the table
Mmm, delightful news you have brought me
I hear wonderful sounds in my ears
Merrily our lives will float on by
There is no stopping where
You talk about sesame chicken
Why I have lowest prices on my mind
Crawl under the table
Scoot, what do you see
It is dark, simplicity at its best
Slice, dice, easy, achew, bless you!
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Wake me up only if it is true, otherwise, allow me to stay in my dream, says Meagan:>
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Re: Nothing
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 05:39:38 PM AEST
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Re: Nothing
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 11:03:15 AM AEST
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I like your style i'm begining 2 see and understand your direction very nice writting
it is well crafted and vey vivid . . .
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Re: Nothing
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 10:03:00 PM AEST
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How lovely it is just to let go, and let the thoughts flow out of the depth capture them and penn them down.
Such a great relief for the writer, and an enrichment for the reader.!
Keep penning your thoughts and share them
dear Meagan.
Be blessed
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