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wanna die
Contributed by
grim6669
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Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 12:49:31 PM in AEST
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superstition's left my side,
paranoia's in my mind,
all i know is who i am,
this messed up life tastes just like sand,
i don't care about this life of mine,
i don't care if i choke and die,
i don't care if i end my life,
i don't care about this life of mine,
my heart still beats,
i hear it pound,
my heart shall beat,
but stop the sound,
i don't care about this life of mine,
i don't care if i choke and die,
i don't care if i end my life,
i don't care about this life of mine,
my world's filled with tears,
nightmares haunting fears
blank stares and devotion,
embarrassed thoughts and emotion,
i don't care about this life of mine,
i don't care if i choke and die,
i don't care if i end my life,
i don't care about this sorry life of mine,
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Re: wanna die
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by grim6669 on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 04:12:35 PM AEST
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| somebody comment already!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: wanna die
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by crazy on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 07:18:05 PM AEST
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wow you and me would get along if this is how you truly feel i hate my life everyone says oh good lil girl she never does any thing bad but oh watch out if she does a smake on the wrist is all it take for her to learn her lesson
what the hell i hate my ******* life god dang
your poem expresses much anger that i feel everyday of my pathetic life loved it great write |
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Re: wanna die
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by sride686 on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 07:37:03 AM AEST
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Good write and very dark with a lot
of self hate. Your writes flow so
smooth and it real draws the reader
in to write. This write just makes me
think how dark life can be and how
easy it is not to care about anyone or
event yourself. Take care girl and
keep it up….Steve
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Re: wanna die
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by Drmbeliever on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 03:56:24 PM AEST
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| Dark....nice write. I find myself reading it all. *heather* |
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Re: wanna die
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 04:27:10 PM AEST
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Good write, emotion filled. Try not to think that way, though I know it sometimes is hard not to, just keep your chin up, and know you have people that care for you.
-Cassy |
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