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Time
Contributed by
Fernanda_F_Rocha
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Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 06:17:28 AM in AEST
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There is so much time
So much
That the source dried
The sun perished
The trunk withered
And the thirst died
There is so much time
So much
That the days are centuries
The nights are wrinkled
The space a drained tumult
And the air a bale
There is so much time
So much
That the death is carried
That the griefs are swallowed
The thunder vanished
And everything faded
By Fernanda F. Rocha
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Fernanda_F_Rocha
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2005-10-23 06:17:28]
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Re: Time
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by enigma on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 12:58:41 PM AEST
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Hi...it's me...I always search for your signature, ladymoon, and I'm never disappointed...the first stanza gave me direction and I just flowed through the rest...I relax when I read your words and tighten up when I read mine...when I write it's like Jacob wrestling with Jehovah, struggling to deserve what I know is already mine, the name Israel.
I'm afraid the practical aspects of time are a source of frustration for me...teaching and home gobble up tremendous amounts...I borrowed much of it last week, will have to pay interest this week, and work hard at disciplining myself from here on out.
I'm looking for a good size block of time to explore your website...thanks for the invite...
got to move on...
blessings,
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Re: Time
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by Fernanda_F_Rocha on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 03:37:47 AM AEST
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Thank You very much for Your commets and support :)
You are too severe with Yourself. You write beautifully on all of the aspects and for that reason I thought it would be interesting You have Your own page for whom wanted to see all Your work :)
All the best :)
LadyMoon
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