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Not A Pretty Sight
Contributed by
xxSuicidalChickxx
on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 03:31:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The three-letter word
That will end her life tonight
You don’t need to say it
She knows she’s not a pretty sight
She starved herself for weeks
She wouldn’t eat at all
She’s scared of what will happen
She’s too weak she’ll fall
All of this happened
Cause someone never cared
Someone didn’t bother
Her life could have been spared
She’s standing there naked
Looking into the mirror
She’s lost weight from not eating
But a tears
Rolling down her check
She slides down onto the floor
She lies there in silence
She looks at the mirror more
She’s still not thin enough
She hasn’t eaten for a while
She kills herself tonight
She’ll never be a pretty sight
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xxSuicidalChickxx
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2005-10-23 03:31:55]
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Re: Not A Pretty Sight
(User Rating: 1 )
by guiltycircles on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 04:15:25 AM AEST
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| awesome...heartbreaking but well written |
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Re: Not A Pretty Sight
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by Spike_BH on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 04:45:58 AM AEST
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| this didnt just hit my heart it. hit my soul. very moving and very well thought out. the images were so well put i could see it in my head. very nice job |
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