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Without Explanation
Contributed by
Silent-No-More
on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 12:49:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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There is no wisdom for this
No new truth to be laid bare
Not a single definable action
That might be taken to prepare
There is no reason in this
No logic to be applied
Nor rationale or explanation
Or pretty bow that can be tied
There no words enough for this
No perfect thing you should say
Not a sound to fill up the silence
That overwhelms me everyday
There’s no precedent
No perfect tense
No context
No time
There’s no thing-to-do
No magic glue
No how-to
No sign
There ~ is ~ only ~ this!
[and it... is... MINE]
And even this
Stupid,
Convaluted,
Now concluding,
Rhyme
… may well be a lie....
[but, at least - I tried]
Copyright ©
Silent-No-More
... [
2005-10-23 00:49:28]
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Re: Without Explanation
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 11:05:31 AM AEST
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wow snemmy! Brilliant write. (God, I hate one word comments,
but I find it difficult for my brain to conjugate a cognitive adjective
to adequately and sincerely describe what it is that your poetry
does to me). But know this, dear Christine ...I love every one
and every one of them does something to me that I can't quite
explain at the moment, but that makes me want to BE better.
You inspire and delight the senses. Thank you.
~Breezy
(who hopes that what she said ^ ^ made some sort of sense ....)
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Re: Without Explanation
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 05:52:39 PM AEST
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I like this. I've always liked the strong, take-it-or-leave-it voice that shines through in some of the most feeling poems, and this is one (very good!) instance of it.
And I like the progression of flow, from the more normal style of the first stanzas to the down-spiralling (so to speak) of the latter parts. I just like it all through.
As a minor note, I think the third line of the second stanza's "rational" might be intending itself to be "rationale" (the noun-form, accented on the latter syllable). Just a pesky matter of an extra 'e'.
Bravo!
Andrew |
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Re: Without Explanation
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by crazy on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 07:31:17 PM AEST
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| thsi is truly a wowed poem i loved it so much depth in it just pure greatness |
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Re: Without Explanation
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 12:41:53 PM AEST
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| Excellent |
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Re: Without Explanation
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by Willofree on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 04:14:06 PM AEST
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A very impressive write, with a very creative style. You seem willing to experiment with different styles, which is a definite positive about your work. Here there seems to be an excellent coordination between form and content. As the intensity of the poem builds, so the form becomes more constricted. This symbolizes the more intense emotion, I think.
Poem, to me, seems to emphasize giving something your best shot....not afraid to try.
Excellent write,
Will |
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Re: Without Explanation
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 01:13:29 PM AEST
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The way it is..is the way it is, eh?
Your voice is so much a part of this...it is so you,
and yet...and yet it has a refreshing new feel or aspect to it... a frankness that is not always a part of your works...something new.
I shall stand back and admire from a far...both this....and you. |
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Re: Without Explanation
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by inoc on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 08:12:13 AM AEST
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A different write that leaves one thinking....
...there is no words enough for this....but
excellent
coni |
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Re: Without Explanation
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by aprilrose on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 12:26:34 AM AEST
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deffenetly a wonderfull write i loved it and reading great poetry like this makes me want to become a better poet you inspire with your writing keep it up and hope to see even more from you.
huggles,kelly/aprilrose |
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Re: Without Explanation
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by SocialMisfit on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 10:31:06 PM AEST
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awsome poem it shows alot of talent, which undoubtably you have i love your write thnx for the read.
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Re: Without Explanation
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by ForeverAlone on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 08:00:36 PM AEST
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Very different, Original, and interesting, very nice job Snemmy
~Clark |
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Re: Without Explanation
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th June 2006 @ 12:49:45 AM AEST
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No explanation needed. I believe I understand.
The poem....the poem....poetic perfection as usual. Absolutely love it!!!!
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