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Death it's Twilight Time
Contributed by
Whisper
on
Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 11:33:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Deaf as a a door nail
My blood pools and clots around me
I am here alive
Still are the nights as I still
Weep out
Calling
Who am I
Trying to wish these life long ambitions away
All of of a sudden somethings put me in a fog
I heard it had too hurt and make ya bleed
You need to listen to me
I was then at awakening by a sudden a change from within.
As it gave itself as drinks to me
the sounds that filled from within me
Help make a weak voice try to repent
What were you when you said
out of jest
As we casually scoffed at his warning
The Proof
I believe was proven
is the great many deaths
No telling No warning
Just a flip of a coin
Its the ignorance of such idiot fools
loose without thinking
like you , me and them .
Death its Twilight time again
Whisper
Copyright ©
Whisper
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2005-10-22 23:33:00]
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Re: Death it's Twilight Time
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 11:49:59 AM AEST
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I dig this off balanced flow
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Re: Death it's Twilight Time
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by Uncertain_Oblivion on
Tuesday, 19th September 2006 @ 11:39:42 AM AEST
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| This was very cool. I liked it. |
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