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why me not them
Contributed by
shaggy2468
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Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 09:52:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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you say we care,
so I go else were,
you say hi,
I say bye.
I don't realy know,
how to show,
the way i feel,
or is this even real.
a tear shows,
but know one knows,
what i think about,
i know thats no reason to pout,
but i feel no one cares,
even bad things come in pairs
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Re: why me not them
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by Chubs on
Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 10:45:08 PM AEST
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| you got to remember tough times come and go. just hang in there. |
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Re: why me not them
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by crazy on
Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 10:51:32 PM AEST
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oh my freaking god this is so me holy freaking crap
wow i think about it all the time but i dont cry
even thow it seems bad keep going loved your poem |
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Re: why me not them
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by KnowledgeTeachesReasons on
Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 11:13:08 PM AEST
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| I think this poem gets across what you wanted it to... how you were feeling about life in general at the time. All these problems, based on the way they are written, seem to be simple problems that keep dwindling over your head; a little more articulation would be in order I feel if these problems were specific, so I think what you wrote was good. I would love to hear your feedback on this... what you mean, etc... |
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