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Contributed by
M
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Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 09:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Look into those lost eyes.
Through the fyr and flames,
Lives a beautiful girl,
Just waiting peacefully,
Waiting to be saved.
Listen to the words from her mouth.
Between the lines of her words,
Totaly different meanings,
Subtle cries for help,
Disguised pleas for someone to save her.
Touch her gentle hand.
Touch it now,
And you may feel her innocence,
Wait a few months,
And you'll find her wounds.
Get to understand her life.
Maybe you will learn to help her,
That way, you'll learn not to judge,
And maybe, just maybe,
She'll be saved.
Copyright ©
M
... [
2003-01-20 21:20:00]
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Re: No Title
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 03:11:10 AM AEST
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This is so beautiful....i hope you showed this to your best friend....she would have cried...as i am now.....beautiful write....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 01:24:30 PM AEST
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This was great I believe I know who this was written for. This is very nicely written and I'll be looking for more of your stuff.
Bobo (Joel) |
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 08:59:53 AM AEST
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| oh baby...thankyou so much...i love you... |
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