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The Dragons Dark Path
Contributed by
Chronos
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Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 06:46:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Into the darkness the dragon doth fly
Out of the shadows he howls his cry
Come, come, the time is now
You will survive, though I know not how
Time is short so we must not waste
Quickly, quickly, we must make haste
Grab your sword and grab your shield
Hurry, hurry, we've no time to yield
Grab your bow and grab your quiver
its pain and suffering we shall deliver
And so we charged from one fight to another
Slaying all, child and mother
Until one day, the light did shine
Caressing and warming this heart of mine
Out of the shadows the dragon doth fly
Never again to howl its cry
Lessons learned, a little to late
Its penance I pay to this very date.
Copyright ©
Chronos
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2005-10-22 18:46:20]
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Re: The Dragons Dark Path
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by crazy on
Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 06:57:33 PM AEST
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| kool poem one i loved how it talked of dragons (so cool) two i love how it says we have to hurry so we dont waste time three i just think it kool good job |
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Re: The Dragons Dark Path
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by Whisper on
Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 09:31:24 PM AEST
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Nice beginning. I liked where you were going with it. Remember they only corrected the spelling . I liked the words YOU wrote. Hope to see more .
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Re: The Dragons Dark Path
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by AshRayne on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 02:59:45 PM AEST
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dragons, demons, to all they are mearly shadows that stalk our minds, praying on those moments when we are afraid to step into the night, when we hide in the light.
exquisite writing that is your gift, be blessed for you are perfection.
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