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Heartless
Contributed by
Jyssvw
on
Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 12:08:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Where is my heart
Where has she disappeared to
Have I lost her forever
If I did
I did not mean to
If I left her
Without shelter
Without warmth and love
Then I am a monster
If I took her
Then forgot her
Or all mentioned in the above
Existed
I left her her to die
Unassisted
I am a fool
For searching clues
Worrying
Punching
A proverbial bruise
Blood attacks
Shiny blacks
And dreadful blues
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Copyright ©
Jyssvw
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2005-10-22 12:08:38]
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Re: Heartless
(User Rating: 1 )
by Alibi on
Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 12:55:08 PM AEST
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| This poem is anything but heartless. It's clearly very heartfelt, and with any luck, she will accept your apology. A woman's heart is a fragile, but precious gift. I hope you treat this lady and her heart with care. Beautiful poem! Good luck to you. |
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Re: Heartless
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 03:12:55 PM AEST
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Nice job jyss. I think we're all capable of being heartless at times, so don't beat yourself up too much about it...lol
H.S. |
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