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alone
Contributed by
RebelRose
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Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 07:38:10 AM in AEST
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i sit in a clubl full of my enemies
i sit in a classroom full of my friends
i stand in a mosh pit at a concert
i stand in a crowd of teens who lost their way
i lay in my blood from my pain
i lay in a bed of roses as bueatiful as me
even though all these things are around me i still fell alone
why do you feel alone when you are not
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Re: alone
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by moon_light on
Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 08:42:22 AM AEST
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this one makes you think.
i feal its becuse even though people are around you you dont feal conected to them.
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Re: alone
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by crazy on
Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 10:00:46 AM AEST
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deep poem i understand what its saying loved it so dark and mysitifing
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Re: alone
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by Jenn2004 on
Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 03:26:20 PM AEST
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| I wonder the same thing too. Im not alone anymore but i still feel like something is missin outta my life. |
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Re: alone
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by Sinfullilmissmuppet on
Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 09:59:37 PM AEST
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Hey,
I know this feeling so well coz i live with it everyday!
good use of rhetorical question at the end
makes u question y u have the right to feel lonely wen ur surrounded
but sumtimes thats the lonliest place to be
till next time
emz |
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Re: alone
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by Spike_BH on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 04:34:31 AM AEST
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this poem is just how i imagined it would be dark scary and have nothing to do with me.
i would like to know when does that time hit? is it when your not with me? And is it not there when you are? |
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Re: alone
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by hellsfallenangel on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 02:04:25 PM AEST
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i like this write it is so true ive had that feeling before ttyl bye
DEMON A.K.A ABBADON |
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