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The Last Goodbye
Contributed by
kolbrun
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Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 07:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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How can I say I´m sorry
When I know that you don´t care?
Now that I hve done you wrong
How can I say these feelings that I share?
I can not say I love you
Or that I really truly care,
´Cause my words would mean as much to you
As a layer of thin air.
How can I say good-bye
Must I face my worat fear?
Must I lose all of these feelings
That I holde so near?
How can I let go
Of a love that was so true?
How can I forget these feelings
That I still hold for you?
Why can´t I say good-bye?
Even when I was wrong
To think that these feelings
Could last forever long?
But I guess it´s really over.
I´m left alone and so sad,
Yet I still think of us
And all the times we had.
Maybe in the future
We can sort this all through,
But until then, my dearest love,
I´ll say one last "I love you."
Copyright ©
kolbrun
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2003-01-20 19:20:00]
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Re: The Last Goodbye
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by Devlina on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 01:05:30 AM AEST
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| I know this one!! Well wirtten! Love can suck, but in time you get over it and life goes on. |
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Re: The Last Goodbye
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by WordPoet on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 02:37:47 PM AEST
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I love when peoplewrite from the heart as you have done here. True emotions seem to add scope to everything written. I was captured from the very first lines..."How can I say I´m sorry ; When I know that you don´t care?" This is something that I can relate to.
Nice write, keep up the good work.
Doug
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Re: The Last Goodbye
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 02:04:20 PM AEST
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| awwww straight from the heart... |
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Re: The Last Goodbye
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by wolfflow on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 08:03:28 PM AEST
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| true heartfelt beauty undiminished |
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Re: The Last Goodbye
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by Chrissie on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 06:28:04 AM AEST
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I can identify with this too Lolbrun. What a lovely, heartfelt poem you have written
Chrissie
Thank you so much for your kind comments on mine |
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Re: The Last Goodbye
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by venkat on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 05:17:14 AM AEST
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| I am very late to read this poem but I am very delighted to read this lovely write..Thank you for sharing..venkat |
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Re: The Last Goodbye
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by riverofwords on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 08:28:06 AM AEST
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waht a strong evocative peom ..loved it
the tone and emotion blend to make the reader feel the loss the hurt and the love lost ..wonderful
peace be yuor journey
terry |
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Re: The Last Goodbye
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 04:28:47 PM AEST
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| kolbrun, i like this poem alot ... mostly coz i've been there... and that's the way you truely appreciate something like this, is if you've been there... keep it up! |
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Re: The Last Goodbye
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 04:29:34 PM AEST
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| kolbrun, i like this poem alot ... mostly coz i've been there... and that's the way you truely appreciate something like this, is if you've been there... keep it up! |
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