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Unbreakable Bond
Contributed by
hoist1atca
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Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 05:55:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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In life, you cross paths with someone special -
And love forever binds you tight one to the other-
For the heart whisper gently to the soul-
I am confused, how about you…
Together the journey will be a new experience-
Each will be led to opening another part of the other-
As the heart and mind will convince the soul-
The result will allow love’s vision to see into tomorrow…
They will stop the moon from hiding with a blink of an eye-
Or maybe capture the sun to warm themselves with just a smile-
And dance in the rain without worry of getting wet-
They are two hearts forever moved by the elements of love…
The essentials of today, will structure the future-
Driving out the thoughts of dashed hopes-
Guiding two hearts, deep in love, toward tomorrow-
Eternally connected together with an unbreakable bond…
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hoist1atca
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2005-10-21 17:55:56]
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Re: Unbreakable Bond
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 06:30:25 PM AEST
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What can I say Joe? Except beautiful. Simply beautiful.
Unbreakable bond ....something most yearn for and
few find ....
Still, the hope is what inspires writes like this, n'est pas?
Great write, Joe!
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Re: Unbreakable Bond
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by Sinfullilmissmuppet on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 10:27:30 PM AEST
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Hey you,
I think i alreddi msged u but thanx for ur comment on my poem,
This poem is very sweet and i love the way u bring in the moon and sun in the second last stanza.
I haven't studied poetry very long so my comments aren't very constructive
till next time
emz |
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Re: Unbreakable Bond
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 06:12:06 AM AEST
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This is beautifull.
Your writings are very deep and straite to the heart of things.
huggs,
smiles,
emy |
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Re: Unbreakable Bond
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 06:12:10 AM AEST
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This is beautifull.
Your writings are very deep and straite to the heart of things.
huggs,
smiles,
emy |
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