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I'll miss you...
Contributed by
Lollypopxcore
on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 05:14:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Part of me wishes we never hung out
part of me's grateful
and deals with the doubt.
My cold, pale hands will miss you
because they'll never hold yours again
my heart will always remain broken
because it knows we're only friends.
You made my body happy
and put a smile on my face
your tongue inside my mouth
enjoying how it tastes.
You stood me up and held me
and put my body close to yours
that is the greatest memory
I can't expirience anymore.
My heart and mind were shattered
fate can never be a friend
love can never last
nothing's ever till the end.
Copyright ©
Lollypopxcore
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2005-10-21 17:14:23]
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Re: I'll miss you...
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by hoist1atca on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 05:35:08 PM AEST
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Nice poem-
Filled with descriptive loss and such anger-
All relationships need help in order to go foreward-
It takes two to continue and two to share the blame-
Joe |
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Re: I'll miss you...
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by shaggy2468 on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 05:35:15 PM AEST
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| i know exacaly how you fell lets talk |
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Re: I'll miss you...
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by crazy on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 05:52:04 PM AEST
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wow i bet this is how my xbf feels when i broke up wit him ohh my gosh i feel this way i want to cry now
extremly amazing poem with much feelings put into it |
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Re: I'll miss you...
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by KaylaNoelHohn on
Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 01:26:14 PM AEST
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Simple and short.. But so much feeling.. You chose the perfect words.. Very good poem.
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Re: I'll miss you...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 05:20:27 PM AEST
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Memories do tend to stay within the heart, yes anger, disappointment, but love never dies. When the end comes, its over, but then again it begins in heaven...
Raquel Leah :D |
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Re: I'll miss you...
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by Gothchyk on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 11:45:31 PM AEST
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| great write. |
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